~에 따르면 (According to), ~인 것으로 나타났다 (Appeared to be), ~을/를 차지했다 (Accounted for), ~의 증가/감소 추세를 보였다 (Showed a trend of increase/decrease). 2. Essay Writing (쓰기 54번)

Highlight increases, decreases, or disparities between categories.

Write a cohesive 600-700 character essay on a general topic (e.g., modern society, technology, psychology). Key Questions to Address: What is the current situation? Why is this topic relevant? What are the specific details or opposing viewpoints? What is your opinion or the solution? Tips for Success:

Stick to ~ㄴ/는다 style (plain form) throughout.

State the main subject and source of the data.

Conclude with the cause of these trends.