If you can of the essay here, I would be happy to help you with: Proofreading and grammar checks. Summarizing the main arguments. Providing feedback on structure and tone.
Apps like Unzip One or ZArchiver can open these on iOS and Android. hrn6um9zeka7.7z
It looks like you've provided a specific filename, , likely containing an essay or document. Because this is a compressed archive file (indicated by the .7z extension), I cannot read its contents directly. If you can of the essay here, I