Instead of vague descriptions, use action-oriented language. For instance, replace "he was angry" with "he slammed the door" to make the scene pop.
Avoid a "cookbook" style (e.g., "He did A. Then B happened.") by weaving in the character’s thoughts and feelings during the action.
Aim for "Shazam" in your writing by being lean and impactful. This avoids reader fatigue and ensures your point is understood quickly. 2. Describing Physical Action
If your goal is to "slam the exam" or create a high-impact persuasive piece, focus on urgency and clear takeaways.
If your writing has been "slammed" by a teacher or peer, it is important to separate the critique from your identity as a writer.
Professional fields often require "dispassionate" writing. If a creative writing teacher dislikes your style, it may simply be a mismatch of expectations for your specific field.